you have made a brief and clear introduction about your topic,and your voice is easy to follow.the comparision between developing and developed country is interesting.good job.
Well done/ A big pat on your back! Like you mentioned, even in Korea considered as one of the most wired nations in the world, we have the problem to do with the digital gap based on the regions and ages. Look forward to your ppt. Keep up the good work!!
Look forward to your help with my computer (it's old, and a mess). Glad you got here in the end.
On the presentation, glad to hear you at last. In your introduction, I'd like to hear what your sections are. This will help you and your audience, outline. Also, I am concerned that you are reading in this (though I might be wrong). On the day, reading from a sheet will mean that you lose the connection with your audience.
Listen for, and notice signposting, and organisation in your classmates' presentations. I hope this helps and that you achieve what you want on Thursday.
Fresh and hot, through so many difficulties recording it, you finally made it!
ReplyDeleteyou have made a brief and clear introduction about your topic,and your voice is easy to follow.the comparision between developing and developed country is interesting.good job.
ReplyDeleteWell done/
ReplyDeleteA big pat on your back!
Like you mentioned, even in Korea considered as one of the most wired nations in the world, we have the problem to do with the digital gap based on the regions and ages.
Look forward to your ppt.
Keep up the good work!!
hi
ReplyDeleteit was great
so u are going to help me out if i have any problem with my computer,,,,hahaha
good voice
fluent
good luck
masy
Look forward to your help with my computer (it's old, and a mess). Glad you got here in the end.
ReplyDeleteOn the presentation, glad to hear you at last. In your introduction, I'd like to hear what your sections are. This will help you and your audience, outline. Also, I am concerned that you are reading in this (though I might be wrong). On the day, reading from a sheet will mean that you lose the connection with your audience.
Listen for, and notice signposting, and organisation in your classmates' presentations. I hope this helps and that you achieve what you want on Thursday.