I think your topic is very interesting. You speak slowly which is good becuase I can follow your talk easily. You have involved the audience in your presentation.Anyway, I think it would be even better if you can have more stress and intonation. But overall, I like it :)Tob
I agree with Tob's point. It will be much better if you emphasize some parts that you think we shouldn't miss. I know you've worked on your presentation so hard. Good job! Hanna
your presentation is great.and you have involved the audience in your talk.I think it could be better if you make some changes in voice.Good job.
hiit was a great presentation i the introduction was great although i think u need to emphesise on some words over all it was clear and easy to followgood luck for thursdaymasy
Your topic is very interesting to me. Your introduction is clear to follow, and at the end, you give some suggestions that are very useful. And if you emphesise on some significant parts next time, that will be better. Good job!
Good job! I can hear more clearly than talking to you face to face.You can be better!